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HOLY SHIT THIS IS AMAZING like im actually going crazy

haha thank you! :)

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short, but still immersive and lovely to read—also leaving me hungry for more. I read the whole thing with bated breath. Chiming in with everyone else: would love a continuation + peek at your other works! 🤌🩷

thank you!! :)

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Omg i loved this so much. I wouldve loved to just have more. This was sooo good. And emotional and short!!! Unfortunately 😭

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aw haha thank you! i would like to expand on it eventually :)

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This was fangtastic. I really enjoyed every bit of it! I would absolutely read about their Vampire Road-trip!!

I only noticed a few small typos; literally everything else was written so perfectly.

You open your eyes cautiously, looking around for anything or anyone that could be effecting you like this, but it’s silent.

If you had needed to breath, you’re sure it would feel suffocating, like gasping for air that’s just not enough.

You take their phone as they hand it to you, inputing the address to a nightclub two states over.

(effecting should be affecting, breath should be breathe, and in inputing should be inputting)

I love that Ko is so kind. Seriously great writing!!

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you’re kind, thank you! and thank you for letting me know, i will fix those :)

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i enjoyed this short story! well written and ko is a sweetheart and i would read more if you ever do continue! loved it!

thank you! :)