Ooo, this one was pretty dark and it felt old timey fr. Probably should of picked a better playlist to listen to while reading this besides my roadtrip one lol. Looking forward to the updates!
Now that i played all your games that are out i gotta say that i loveeee your writing and I'm really interested in what happens next! It's an interesting story that kind of surprised me at first but honestly it was a great suprise :]
Sometimes when i played IFs i skip thru some of the scenes (idk why guess i just wanna get to another part of the story ig?) but when i was reading this IF i was not able to cause IT IS AWESOME
Sooo Goodluck with your next projects and this one <3
Learn how to be a person again huh? I hope this have some philosophy about life, love and their definition, meaning. Or maybe there were and i am just too dumb to realise. Nice work btw
Ohh this was really curious! You really nailed it with that gothic horror kind of vibe, the opening was really eye opening, hehe, and just the way the story narrates how MC's family just completely falls apart and the apathy of the townspeople was really quite heartbreaking. The curiosity of what exactly is happening to MC and if there is something much sinister happening is quite intriguing!
Looking forward to what comes next~ Best of luck with the progression of the development~!
that first page took me by surprise. God so much pain in a prologue. Guess I'm falling inlove with another writer that's good at killing people ๐คฆ๐ปโโ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
โ Return to game
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I likey disssss. That last poem or more quote was quite the capture. Looking forward to more work.
the poem was one of my favorite parts to write! thank you for playing! :)
Seems interesting! I'll be sure to check this out.
Ooo, this one was pretty dark and it felt old timey fr. Probably should of picked a better playlist to listen to while reading this besides my roadtrip one lol. Looking forward to the updates!
future updates will have optional instrumental music to maybe help with that haha, thank you for playing!! :)
Now that i played all your games that are out i gotta say that i loveeee your writing and I'm really interested in what happens next! It's an interesting story that kind of surprised me at first but honestly it was a great suprise :]
Sometimes when i played IFs i skip thru some of the scenes (idk why guess i just wanna get to another part of the story ig?) but when i was reading this IF i was not able to cause IT IS AWESOME
Sooo Goodluck with your next projects and this one <3
ahh youโre so kind, thank you!! :)
Intriguing! Only comment is that "her and father" should be "she and father." Looking forward to more!
oops thatโll be fixed next update, thank you!
Woah.. I mean..woah
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Learn how to be a person again huh? I hope this have some philosophy about life, love and their definition, meaning. Or maybe there were and i am just too dumb to realise. Nice work btw
thank you! :)
this is peak
haha thank you! :)
Ohh this was really curious! You really nailed it with that gothic horror kind of vibe, the opening was really eye opening, hehe, and just the way the story narrates how MC's family just completely falls apart and the apathy of the townspeople was really quite heartbreaking. The curiosity of what exactly is happening to MC and if there is something much sinister happening is quite intriguing!
Looking forward to what comes next~ Best of luck with the progression of the development~!
very kind, thank you! :)
Super good I love it <3 Can't wait for more I need more damn cliff hangers XD
thank you!! :)
Bless you for adding hazel green and hazel brown. Finally someone gets it. :)
haha :)
Holy shit, that was absolutely amazing. can't wait for future updates.
thank you!! :)
I love this! It reminds me of edith finch :3
thank you! i can see the comparison :)
Oh i like this already and you really did a good job to get me hooked so i can't wait to see more of this ๐
thank you, iโm glad!! :)
Wow just like wow....
that first page took me by surprise. God so much pain in a prologue. Guess I'm falling inlove with another writer that's good at killing people ๐คฆ๐ปโโ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
the last sentence is so funny haha iโm sorry i had to do it!<3